
Grandpa, Leah and I when I was one month old
Love, Karly
I am taking a writing class. We are focusing on poetry right now, so I thought I would write a poem about my grandpa. Here is my rough copy. After class today I will try and post my edited version.
Sending Grandpa Home
I came to earth with challenges you had never seen
I’ve lived a life apart from yours
I understood what you said to me but did not answer with language you received
You felt pity, I felt the same
I wanted a Grandpa who could play
In your final months I saw a change
I felt your love
I saw your pain
You tried to understand
You heard my typing and questioned me about who I am
I know you saw my chair, but it no longer scared
You saw me
We could be real
We saw each others eyes
I will see you soon Grandpa
I will see you soon
Karly W
Megan said,
June 26, 2009 @ 3:39 pm
What a beautiful poem — especially if it is the rough draft version! I love that you are taking a writing class; I look forward to reading more of your writing class work in addition to your thoughts about living with Rett Syndrome.
bethanycrossley said,
June 26, 2009 @ 8:38 pm
Beautiful Miss Karly, as always! It was great to chat with you guys today! I am glad you were able to enjoy the river. I love that river! It is so majestic and peaceful~ Like the aforementioned comment, I will also be excited to read your finished version! :O) I am glad for what a family’s love can do!
Sandy said,
June 28, 2009 @ 11:24 pm
Karly I am so sorry that you lost your Grandpa. I am very glad that you got to spend quality time with each other – your poem is beautiful just the way it is, right from the heart. I hope you enjoy your writing class, that is something I have always wanted to do.